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God said to Lucifer , "you have six days to chose to be evil or good." young Lucifer agreed. the devil admired God, and revered his power over others. Lucifer wanted to be like God when he grew up. he wanted to be loved, just like God. so Lucifer went home to his lovely little town called Hell. Hell was like any other town, small and peaceful, and especially beautiful. Lucifer's house was small, but nice. surrounded by a beautiful flower garden. Lucifer went to bed as the sun set, deciding to tell god he wanted to choose good in the morning. 

the first day
Lucifer woke up to the sun shining through his bedroom window. he got up and stretched, then walked outside on his way to God's city. the city of Heaven, only a little ways away from Hell. but when he walked outside, he saw that six of his flower sections were on fire. he ran and got the hose and put out the fire. a single tear ran down his face. how could something so pure and beautiful be burned like this? so he spent the rest of the day replanting all of his flowers and fixing everything that was destroyed. after he was done he got up to go see God, but realized it was pitch black. that's okay, Lucifer thought. i still have five days, i will go and see him tomorrow. 

the second day
Lucifer woke up late in the afternoon after a good nights sleep. he got up and stretched, then walked outside on his way to Heaven. he got to the end of his street when he saw six stray dogs lying injured on the street. Lucifer couldn't understand how something so pure and beautiful could be hurt. so he spent the rest of the day finding the dogs homes and when he finally got back to his street, it was pitch black. that's okay, Lucifer thought. i still have four days, i will go and see him tomorrow.

the third day
Lucifer woke up to the sunlight streaming through his bedroom window. he got up and stretched, then walked outside on his way to Heaven. he got halfway through the city when he saw six children crying. he walked up to them and asked why they were crying. they told him that they had all lost their mommies and daddies and were scared. So Lucifer went all over the city to find the six childrens' parents. he found all the parents and was thanked furiously for his kindness. but unfortunately, it was pitch black by then, and he had to go home. that's okay, Lucifer thought. i still have three days left. i will go and see him tomorrow. 

the forth day
Lucifer woke up determined to see god today. he hopped out of bed and ran outside. he once again got halfway through the city. but when he looked to his left, he say six children being beaten by a mad man. he ran up to the man and yelled at him until the mad man stumbling away. the kids thanked Lucifer for his kindness, but told him that they didn't know where to go. so Lucifer took them to the town orphanage so they could find good homes, but when he stepped outside, it was pitch black, and he had to go home. that's okay, he thought. i still have two days left, i will go and see God tomorrow.

the fifth day
Lucifer woke up absolutely sure he would see God today. he rushed out of the house and made almost to the city of Heaven, when he say six trees on fire. he had to go and get the fire department or the whole town would burn down. so he ran as fast as he could to the other side of town and told them about the fire. they put out the fire and Lucifer was about to head back to Heaven when he realized that it was pitch black, and he had to go home. that's okay, he thought. i still have tomorrow left, i will go and see God tomorrow for sure.

the sixth day
Lucifer woke up from a restless night and desperately ran out of his house no even stopping to close the door. he ran all the way to Heaven and when he was almost to the gates, he saw six children in a burning building, so he ran into the building and tried to find the children and after a long deadly search, he found them. he brought the children out of the building to safety  where he was regarded as a hero. but the sun was setting, and it was almost night. Lucifer ran as fast as he possibly could to the gates, but it was too late. the gates closed right as his fingers reached them. Lucifer fell to his knees crying. he didn't make it. so God assumed that Lucifer chose to be evil and set the town of Hell on fire, burning everything. the children the trees the buildings, and his precious flower garden. the only thing that didn't burn was Lucifer. he then knew that he would live forever it this nightmare; this hell. 
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DeaththePuppy's avatar
Nice approach at a different view of what happened.